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= Chapter 4 =
== 4a - Enter Cadence ==
<small>''Follows from [[Ivy's visual novel/Transcription#3a - The Server's Dream|Chapter 3a - The Server's Dream]].''</small><br>
''Ivy meets her new charge.''

'''{{HeroIcon|Cadence}}:''' ''[Singing "Paying The Price"]'': <br>''The candles are lit, they walk in through the door<br>Clad in silken robes, the lamb tied on the floor<br>It bleats and it screams, cries that you will ignore<br>The pursuit of power has far worse in store<br>Because you're paying the price, there's no turning back now<br>The blood on your hands washes off anyhow<br>You say it's in thanks, we all know that's not true<br>You murdered that girl just cause you wanted to.''

'''{{HeroIcon|Ivy}}:''' She's really good.

(...)

'''{{HeroIcon|Cadence}}:''' Archie, who's that?

(...)

'''{{HeroIcon|Cadence}}:''' Oh, come on.

(...)

'''{{HeroIcon|Ivy}}:''' Hi, I'm Ivy. it's nice to meet you.

'''{{HeroIcon|Cadence}}:''' Cadence. Look, Ivy, you seem nice and I'm sure you've come a long way, but...

'''{{HeroIcon|Ivy}}:''' Oh I actually just met Mr. Nice down the street.

(...)

'''{{HeroIcon|Cadence}}:''' I'm sure it was impressive, but I really think you're overreacting, Archie.

(...)

'''{{HeroIcon|Ivy}}:''' One window not enough for you this week? 

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'''{{HeroIcon|Ivy}}:''' Buddy, I don't think that's going to be up to you.

(...)

'''{{HeroIcon|Ivy}}:'''  Your friends are about to find-

(...)

'''{{HeroIcon|Cadence}}:''' I'm pretty sure the bodyguard you hired just made things worse.

'''{{HeroIcon|Ivy}}:''' If you don't stand up to bullies, that's what makes things worse. If anything gets broken tonight sir, I promise to help fix it.

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'''Followed by:'''<br>
''[[Ivy's visual novel/Transcription#5a - The Concert|"The Concert"]]''
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== 4e - Helping Hand ==
<small>''Follows from [[Ivy's visual novel/Transcription#3d - Serving Lash|Chapter 3d - Serving Lash]].''</small><br>
''Ivy discovers she has something in common with Lash.''

'''{{HeroIcon|Ivy}}:''' He’s gonna get himself killed.

'''{{HeroIcon|Lash}}:''' Don't be shy, boys. Dr. Lash has plenty of medicine to give.

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'''{{HeroIcon|Lash}}:''' Why don't you come a little closer. I couldn't hear you.

'''{{HeroIcon|Ivy}}:''' Did he say Mendoza?

(...)

'''{{HeroIcon|Lash}}:''' Not bad.

'''{{HeroIcon|Ivy}}:''' ''[Grunt]'' Did he say Mendoza?

'''{{HeroIcon|Lash}}:''' I know it's hard to believe but not everyone is a fan of the Lash.

'''{{HeroIcon|Ivy}}:''' He said he was going to leave New York!

'''{{HeroIcon|Lash}}:''' People lie.

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'''{{HeroIcon|Ivy}}:''' Where is- Ugh! Where is he?

'''{{HeroIcon|Lash}}:''' You uh, need my help?

'''{{HeroIcon|Ivy}}:''' Yeah, but not with this guy.

(...)

'''{{HeroIcon|Lash}}:'''  Ooh... I like you, "Sweet Wings".

'''{{HeroIcon|Ivy}}:''' My name is Ivy.

'''{{HeroIcon|Lash}}:''' You know what, you earned yourself an actual name. 

'''{{HeroIcon|Ivy}}:''' Can you take me to him?

'''{{HeroIcon|Lash}}:'''  After we take out these guys, no problem.

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