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 Interviewer: Okay. Well, what do you think about these?
+''Followed by [[Ivy's visual novel/Transcription#Chapter 2a - On The Job Training|Chapter 2a]] (Take A Job As A Waitress), [[Ivy's visual novel/Transcription#Chapter 2b - Trust In The Process|2b]] (Take A Job As A Process Server) or [[Ivy's visual novel/Transcription#Chapter 2c - Family Meeting|2c]] (Go Home To Think About Your Options)''
 == Chapter 2a - On The Job Training ==
+''Follows from [[Ivy's visual novel/Transcription#Chapter 1 - Career Day|Chapter 1]]''
 Ivy: Okay, that's two orange juices, two coffees, cheddar omelette with hash browns, cheddar omelette without hash browns, a short stack with extra maple syrup, and a waffle!
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 Female Coworker: Ignore them.
+''Followed by [[Ivy's visual novel/Transcription#Chapter 3a - The Server's Dream|Chapter 3a]] (Choose Vigilante Justice) or [[Ivy's visual novel/Transcription#Chapter 3b - Tough Day|3b]] (Choose To Just Get Through The Day)''
 == Chapter 2b - Trust In The Process ==
-Ivy: Uh so I want to make sure I understand this you want me to go up to criminals but not punch them.
+''Follows from [[Ivy's visual novel/Transcription#Chapter 1 - Career Day|Chapter 1]]''
+Ivy: Uh... So, I wanna make sure I understand this. You want me to go up to criminals, but not punch them.
 Lawyer: We don't know they're criminals.
-Ivy: If they didn't do anything wrong why are they being served.
+Ivy: If they didn't do anything wrong, why are they being served?
-Lawyer: Well they might have done something wrong we don't know. All we care about is getting the piece of paper into their hands so they can know they have legal issues, anything after that is not our problem.
+Lawyer: Well they might have done something wrong, we don't know. All we care about is getting the piece of paper into their hands so they can know they have legal issues. Anything after that is not our problem.
-Ivy: Okay so who am I not punching today.
+Ivy: Okay. So, who am I not punching today?
-Lawyer: Well I got two options for you first is a mobster goes by Wraith.
+Lawyer: Well, I got two options for you: First is a mobster, goes by Wraith.
-Ivy: Wai –wai- wa- wai- wai- wait aren't Mobsters criminals.
+Ivy: Wa-wa-wa-wa-wait. Aren't mobsters criminals?
 Lawyer: Oh yeah.
-Ivy: You just said we didn't know they did something wrong.
+Ivy: You just said we didn't know they did something wrong!
-Lawyer: In this case we can make reasonable assumptions.
+Lawyer: In this case, we can make reasonable assumptions.
 Ivy: So can I punch her?
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 Ivy: Why not!
-Lawyer: Two reasons one it's assault; two everyone deserves due process.
+Lawyer: Two reasons: One, it's assault; two, everyone deserves due process.
 Ivy: The law seems pretty stupid.
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 Lawyer: You have no idea.
-Ivy: Who's the other option?
+Ivy: Well, who's the other option?
 Lawyer: Jacob Lash.
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 Ivy: Got it.
+''Followed by [[Ivy's visual novel/Transcription#Chapter 3c - Career Day|Chapter 3c]] (Serve Wraith) or [[Ivy's visual novel/Transcription#Chapter 3d - Serving Lash|3d]] (Serve Lash)''
 == Chapter 2c - Family Meeting ==
+''Follows from [[Ivy's visual novel/Transcription#Chapter 1 - Career Day|Chapter 1]]''
 Ivy: Hey everyone, sorry I'm late. I was meeting with a recruiter and got... What's going on?
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 Ivy: How can we help?
+''Followed by [[Ivy's visual novel/Transcription#Chapter 3e - I Believe In Carlos Arroyo|Chapter 3e]] (Canvass For Carlos)''
 == Chapter 3a - The Server's Dream ==
+''Follows from [[Ivy's visual novel/Transcription#Chapter 2a - On The Job Training|Chapter 2a]]''
 (...)
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 Ivy: Let's do it.
+''Followed by [[Ivy's visual novel/Transcription#Chapter 4a - Enter Cadence|Chapter 4a]] (Work Cadence's Concert)''
 == Chapter 3b - Tough Day ==
+''Follows from [[Ivy's visual novel/Transcription#Chapter 2a - On The Job Training|Chapter 2a]]''
 (...)
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 Ivy: You got it, Carlos.
+''To be continued...''
 == Chapter 3c - Career Day ==
+''Follows from [[Ivy's visual novel/Transcription#Chapter 2b - Trust In The Process|Chapter 2b]]''
 Wraith: How are things going?
+(...)
 Wraith: Mo or Krill?
+(...)
 Wraith: I'll go talk to them.
-Ivy: Excuse me I'm looking for Miss Wraith?
+Ivy: Excuse me. I'm looking for Miss Wraith?
+(...)
-Wraith: What is it? I'm wraith what's going on?
+Wraith: What is it? I'm Wraith, what's going on?
 Ivy: I'm sorry for barging into your... totally normal back room.
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 Wraith: Social clubs are common in lots of tailor shops.
-Ivy: I'm not sure that's true anyway you've been served here's the. Sophie, what are you doing here? Do you know how much trouble you'll be in if Carlos caught you playing in an illegal poker game?
+Ivy: I'm not sure that's true. Anyway, you've been served, here's the- Sophie, what are you doing here?
+(...)
+Ivy: Do you know how much trouble you'll be in if Carlos caught you playing in an illegal poker game?
 Wraith: She's not playing, she's just helping with my books.
-Ivy: Oh my God that's worse! I thought you said you had a scholarship! What! She is a criminal!
+Ivy: Oh my god, that's worse!
+(...)
+Ivy: I thought you said you had a scholarship!
+(...)
+Ivy: What?
+(...)
-Wraith: I am a female entrepreneur in a male dominated industry, as far as role models go,
+Ivy: She is a criminal!
-I'm basically Florence Nightingale with a gun.
+Wraith: I am a female entrepreneur in a male dominated industry. As far as role models go, I'm basically Florence Nightingale with a gun.
 Ivy: No no, I'm taking you home.
-Wraith: Look I can keep Sophie out of trouble.
+Wraith: Look, I can keep Sophie out of trouble.
 Ivy: You're the one getting her in trouble!
-Wraith: If you call financing a smart girl's dreams of higher education getting her in trouble
+Wraith: If you call financing a smart girl's dreams of higher education "getting her in trouble": guilty as charged.
-guilty as charged.
-Ivy: If the cops raid this place she's going to jail.
+Ivy: If the cops raid this place, she's going to jail!
 Wraith: That's why God invented bribes.
 Ivy: Oh my God.
+''To be continued...''
 == Chapter 3d - Serving Lash ==
-Ivy: Uh excuse me I I'm looking for Jacob Lash? What do you mean? Oh he's not here oh uh,
+''Follows from [[Ivy's visual novel/Transcription#Chapter 2b - Trust In The Process|Chapter 2b]]''
-you mind if I um, excuse me Mr. Lash?
-Lash: Sorry sweet Wings don't sign autographs when I'm working
+Ivy: Uh, excuse me. I'm looking for Jacob Lash?
-Ivy: *Scoffs* Is that what you call this?
+(...)
+Ivy: What do you mean?
+(...)
+Ivy: Oh, he's not here?
+(...)
+Ivy: Oh. You mind if I...
+(...)
+Ivy: Um. [Clears throat] Excuse me, Mr. Lash?
+Lash: Sorry, "Sweet Wings". Don't sign autographs when I'm working.
+Ivy: [Scoffs] Is that what you call this?
 Lash: The Lash doesn't have to explain his craft to you.
-Ivy: What craft you're sitting on an ibeam.
+Ivy: What craft? You're sitting on an I-beam.
-Lash: Nah babe, I am ruminating on an ibeam.
+Lash: Nah, babe. I am ruminating on an I-beam.
-Ivy: Well here's something else for you to ruminate on.
+Ivy: Well, here's something else for you to ruminate on.
 Lash: What is this?
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 Ivy: You've been served.
-Lash: Oh oh this day just keeps getting better and better.
+Lash: Oh, this day just keeps getting better and better.
-Ivy: I'm sorry oh, um Mr. lash it's none of my business but there were some people down there waiting for you they didn't look particularly kind.
+Ivy: I'm sorry. Oh, Mr. Lash? it's none of my business, but there were some people down there waiting for you. They didn't look particularly kind.
-Ivy: Yeah that's why I'm up here.
+Lash: Yeah, that's why I'm up here.
 Ivy: But if you want I can scare them off.
-Lash: That's a good one lady, but the Lash isn't running. He just needs a little bit of time to figure out whose teeth, he's going to kick in first.
+Lash: That's a good one lady, but the Lash isn't running. He just needs a little bit of time to figure out whose teeth he's gonna kick in first.
-Ivy: You're going to fight them all yourself?
+Ivy: You're gonna fight them all yourself?
 Lash: Yes.
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 Ivy: There's like, a lot of them.
-Lash: Odds are for people who are good at math. Now if you excuse me the Lash has to get
+Lash: Odds are for people who are good at math. Now if you excuse me, the Lash has to get to work.
-to work.
+''Followed by [[Ivy's visual novel/Transcription#Chapter 4e - Helping Hand|Chapter 4e]] (Help Lash (Even Though He Doesn't Deserve It))''
 == Chapter 3e - I Believe In Carlos Arroyo ==
+''Follows from [[Ivy's visual novel/Transcription#Chapter 2c - Family Meeting|Chapter 2c]]''
 Ivy: Good morning sir, would you-
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 Ivy: Yeah. I can't imagine what my life would be like if it weren't for Carlos and his family.
+''To be continued...''
 == Chapter 4a - Enter Cadence ==
+''Follows from [[Ivy's visual novel/Transcription#Chapter 3a - The Server's Dream|Chapter 3a]]''
 Cadence: [Singing] ''The candles are lit, they walk in through the door / Clad in silken robes, the lamb tied on the floor / It bleats and it screams, cries that you will ignore / The pursuit of power has far worse in store / Because you're paying the price, there's no turning back now / The blood on your hands washes off anyhow / You say it's in thanks, we all know that's not true / You murdered that girl just cause you wanted to.''
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 Ivy: If you don't stand up to bullies, that's what makes things worse. If anything gets broken tonight sir, I promise to help fix it.
+''To be continued...''
 == Chapter 4e - Helping Hand ==
+''Follows from [[Ivy's visual novel/Transcription#Chapter 3d - Serving Lash|Chapter 3d]]''
 Ivy: He’s gonna get himself killed.

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