@@ Line 11: / Line 11: @@
 Ivy: Just Ivy is fine.
-Interviewer: Okay Ivy that's a *Heh* that's an interesting name for gargoyle
+Interviewer: Okay, Ivy! That's a, heh, that's an interesting name for a gargoyle.
 Ivy: it's a long story, thanks for meeting with me.
-Interviewer: Anything for Carlos, so uh what type of work are you looking for?
+Interviewer: Well, anything for Carlos. So, what type of work are you looking for?
-Ivy: Uh that's the thing I don't know for the past 20 years I was so focused on cleaning up
+Ivy: Ah, that's the thing... I don't know. For the past 20 years I was so focused on cleaning up Spanish Harlem, I never really thought about what to do when I was finished.
-Spanish Harlem I never really thought about what to do when I was finished.
 Interviewer: Oh, so you have Municipal experience?
@@ Line 26: / Line 25: @@
 Interviewer: And how do you know Carlos?
-Ivy: *Slight Chuckle* longer story.
+Ivy: Ha, longer story.
 Interviewer: But you're looking for a job.
-Ivy: Yeah the Arroyos are wonderful people, and Carlos would never ask me to pay rent but
+Ivy: Yeah. The Arroyos are wonderful people, and Carlos would never ask me to pay rent but, like... now that Sophie's going to fancy college, I feel like I need to contribute. Not that dismantling the Mendoza Syndicate isn't contributing, that's just more... contributing with a "capital C", as opposed to like, buying groceries.
-like now that Sophie's going to fancy College I feel like I need to contribute not that
-dismantling the Mendoza Syndicate isn't contributing that's just more contributing with a
-Capital C as opposed to like buying groceries.
-Interviewer: Right....
+Interviewer: Right...
-Ivy: So I- I was hoping that you know, you could point me in a direction.
+Ivy: So, I was hoping that... you know, you could point me in a direction.
-Interviewer: Well, let's see what we can do what are your hobbies?
+Interviewer: Well, let's see what we can do! What are your hobbies?
-Ivy: Uh that don't involve violence?
+Ivy: Uh, that don't involve violence?
-Interviewer: Ideally.
+Interviewer: Ideally...
-Ivy: People watching! Though if I'm being real honest that usually was the precursor to
+Ivy: People watching! Though if I'm being real honest, that usually was the precursor to vigilante justice.
-vigilante justice.
-Interviewer: Okay... What about special skills
+Interviewer: Okay... What about special skills?
 Ivy: That also don't involve violence?
-Interviewer: Please...
+Interviewer: Please?
 Ivy: I can fly.
@@ Line 58: / Line 53: @@
 Interviewer: I can work with that! Anything else I should know?
-Ivy: I care about people like a lot, and I know that I'm not exactly your average applicant but
+Ivy: I care about people. Like... a lot. And I know that I'm not exactly your average applicant, but... I work hard. And I learn fast and I... I just want to help.
-I work hard and I learn fast and I- I just want to help.
-Interviewer: Okay well what do you think about these?
+Interviewer: Okay. Well, what do you think about these?
 == Chapter 2a - On The Job Training ==
@@ Line 78: / Line 72: @@
 Ivy: Got it. I'll be there in a second sir.
-Female Coworker: Ivy ignore them.
+Female Coworker: Ivy, ignore them.
 == Chapter 2b - Trust In The Process ==
-Ivy: Uh so I want to make sure I understand this you want me to go up to criminals but not
+Ivy: Uh so I want to make sure I understand this you want me to go up to criminals but not punch them.
-punch them.
 Lawyer: We don't know they're criminals.
@@ Line 88: / Line 81: @@
 Ivy: If they didn't do anything wrong why are they being served.
-Lawyer: Well they might have done something wrong we don't know. All we care about is
+Lawyer: Well they might have done something wrong we don't know. All we care about is getting the piece of paper into their hands so they can know they have legal issues,
-getting the piece of paper into their hands so they can know they have legal issues,
 anything after that is not our problem.
@@ Line 127: / Line 119: @@
 == Chapter 2c - Family Meeting ==
-Ivy: Hey everyone sorry I'm late I was meeting with a recruiter and, got. Wha- what's going
+Ivy: Hey everyone, sorry I'm late. I was meeting with a recruiter and got... What's going on?
-on is everything okay? Wha- what do you mean change? How can we help.
+(...)
+Ivy: Is everything okay?
+(...)
+Ivy: What do you mean, change?
+(...)
+Ivy: How can we help?
 == Chapter 3a - The Server's Dream ==
-Ivy: Ugh that felt good.
+(...)
+Ivy: Ah, that felt good.
 Female Coworker: I bet.
@@ Line 137: / Line 142: @@
 Ivy: I'm getting fired, aren't I?
-Female Coworker: Oh yeah.
+Female Coworker: Oh, yeah.
+(...)
+Ivy: Got nothing but time now!
+(...)
+Ivy: I didn't get any glass in your French toast, did I?
+(...)
+Ivy: You're not as unfun as I thought.
+(...)
+Ivy: I tossed a jerk through glass, I'm not sure I'd call that a talent.
+(...)
+Ivy: Uh... they're a band, right? I think Sophie listens to them.
+(...)
+Ivy: Oh, she's my adoptive sist-
+(...}
+Ivy: So what do I have to do?
+(...)
-Ivy: Got nothing but time now I didn't get any glass in your French toast did I? You're not as
+Ivy: Let's do it.
-unfun as I thought. I tossed a jerk through glass I'm not sure I'd call that a talent. Uh they're
-a band, right? I think Sophie listens to them, oh she's my adoptive sist-. So what do I have
-to do? Let's do it.
 == Chapter 3b - Tough Day ==
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 == Chapter 3e - I Believe In Carlos Arroyo ==
-Ivy: Good morning sir would you. Excuse me ma'am would you be interested in learning
+Ivy: Good morning sir, would you-
-why Carlos Arroyo should be New York's next mayor? Well you know what they say about
-gargoyles, me neither, it seemed like a thing to say. My name's actually just Ivy. Well
+(...)
-there's two reasons for that one I believe in Carlos Arroyo and two, I- I don't really know
-what the Maelstrom is. What's there to wish for? I have an amazing family, my
+Ivy: Excuse me, ma'am! Would you be interested in learning why Carlos Arroyo should be New York's next mayor?
-neighborhood is safe, and I'm living in the greatest city in the world. That's cheating! And
-Carlos wouldn't want to win that way. What for I'm not running for mayor, *Whispers* do
+(...)
-you think it would help him? Okay sure! Yeah. I can't imagine what my life would be like
-if it weren't for Carlos and his family.
+Ivy: Well you know what they say about gargoyles!
+(...)
+Ivy: Me neither, it... seemed like a thing to say.
+(...)
+Ivy: My name's actually just Ivy.
+(...)
+Ivy: Well, there's two reasons for that: One, I believe in Carlos Arroyo, and two... I don't really know what the Maelstrom is.
+(...)
+Ivy: What's there to wish for? I have an amazing family, my neighborhood is safe, and I'm living in the greatest city in the world.
+(...)
+Ivy: That's cheating! And Carlos wouldn't want to win that way.
+(...)
+Ivy: What for? I'm not running for mayor.
+(...)
+Ivy: [Whispers] Do you think it would help him?
+(...)
+Ivy: Okay, sure!
+(...)
+Ivy: Yeah. I can't imagine what my life would be like if it weren't for Carlos and his family.
 == Chapter 4a - Enter Cadence ==
-Cadence: [Music] The candles are lit, they walk in through the door, clad in silken ropes, the
+Cadence: [Singing] ''The candles are lit, they walk in through the door / Clad in silken robes, the lamb tied on the floor / It bleats and it screams, cries that you will ignore / The pursuit of power has far worse in store / Because you're paying the price, there's no turning back now / The blood on your hands washes off anyhow / You say it's in thanks, we all know that's not true / You murdered that girl just cause you wanted to.''
-lamp tied on the floor. It bleeds and it screams, cries that you will ignore the pursuit of
-power, has far worse in store. Because you're paying the price, there's no turning back
-now, the blood on your hands washes off anyhow, you say it's in thanks we all know that's
-not true you murdered that girl just cause you wanted to. [Music]
 Ivy: She's really good.
-Cadence: Archie who's that? Oh come on.
+(...)
+Cadence: Archie, who's that?
+(...)
+Cadence: Oh, come on.
-Ivy: Hi I'm Ivy it's nice to meet you.
+(...)
-Cadence: Cadence, look Ivy you seem nice and I'm sure you've come a long way but.
+Ivy: Hi, I'm Ivy. it's nice to meet you.
+Cadence: Cadence. Look, Ivy, you seem nice and I'm sure you've come a long way, but...
 Ivy: Oh I actually just met Mr. Nice down the street.
-Cadence: I'm sure it was impressive, but I really think you're overreacting Archie.
+(...)
-Ivy: One window not enough for you this week buddy I don't think that's going to be up to
+Cadence: I'm sure it was impressive, but I really think you're overreacting, Archie.
-you. Your friends are about to find-.
-Cadence: I'm pretty sure the Bodyguard you hired just made things worse.
+(...)
-Ivy: If you don't stand up to bullies that's what makes things worse. If anything gets broken
+Ivy: One window not enough for you this week?
-tonight sir, I promise to help fix it.
+(...)
+Ivy: Buddy, I don't think that's going to be up to you.
+(...)
+Ivy:  Your friends are about to find-
+(...)
+Cadence: I'm pretty sure the bodyguard you hired just made things worse.
+Ivy: If you don't stand up to bullies, that's what makes things worse. If anything gets broken tonight sir, I promise to help fix it.
 == Chapter 4e - Helping Hand ==
-Ivy: He’s going to get himself killed.
+Ivy: He’s gonna get himself killed.
-Lash: Don't be shy boys. Dr. Lash has plenty of medicine to give. Why don't you come a
+Lash: Don't be shy, boys. Dr. Lash has plenty of medicine to give.
-little closer. I couldn't hear you.
+(...)
+Lash: Why don't you come a little closer. I couldn't hear you.
 Ivy: Did he say Mendoza?
+(...)
 Lash: Not bad.
-Ivy: *Grunt* Did he say Mendoza?
+Ivy: [Grunt] Did he say Mendoza?
 Lash: I know it's hard to believe but not everyone is a fan of the Lash.
-Ivy: He said he was going to leave New York.
+Ivy: He said he was going to leave New York!
+Lash: People lie.
-Lash: *In Pain* People lie.
+(...)
-Ivy: Where is Ugh! Where is he?
+Ivy: Where is- Ugh! Where is he?
-Lash: You uh need my help?
+Lash: You uh, need my help?
 Ivy: Yeah, but not with this guy.
-Lash: Ooh I like you sweet Wings.
+(...)
+Lash: Ooh... I like you, "Sweet Wings".
+Ivy: My name is Ivy.
+Lash: You know what, you earned yourself an actual name.
+Ivy: Can you take me to him?
-Ivy: My name is Ivy you know.
+Lash:  After we take out these guys, no problem.
-Lash: You know what you earned yourself an actual name can you take me to him after we
+''To be continued...''
-take out these guys, no problem
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