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{{Feedback|feedback="Taking up a new identity as "Pocket", Pocket tries their best to hide their identity, but hasn't given up on their expensive jacket" seems a little lofty, as Pocket's jacket/cloak is a cursed/magical artifact. It's not impossible Pocket ist aware of it being a high society status symbol, but it would make absolutely no sense to give up as it is one of the things keeping them alive. Perhaps the line should read after the last comma: "but their pricless and indispensable jacket can make people aware of their wealthy background - or towards believing that they're a mugger."|user=~2026-CratesBarrierHealth565|resolved=true}} | {{Feedback|feedback="Taking up a new identity as "Pocket", Pocket tries their best to hide their identity, but hasn't given up on their expensive jacket" seems a little lofty, as Pocket's jacket/cloak is a cursed/magical artifact. It's not impossible Pocket ist aware of it being a high society status symbol, but it would make absolutely no sense to give up as it is one of the things keeping them alive. Perhaps the line should read after the last comma: "but their pricless and indispensable jacket can make people aware of their wealthy background - or towards believing that they're a mugger."|user=~2026-CratesBarrierHealth565|resolved=true}} | ||