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-The map is the area where matches are fought. Matches are held between 6 players on 2 teams on opposing sides of the map. Players spawn in a base where items can be purchased with soul orbs (future hyperlink here) through a shop interface. There are four lanes colored yellow, orange, blue and magenta (or pink) and a jungle (hyperlink) in the middle of the map. Each lane has 4 objectives, Guardians and Walkers, who guard the Patron (hyperlink).
+The map is the area where matches are contested. Each match features 6 players divided into 2 teams, positioned on opposing sides of the map. Players start at a base, where they can purchase items using soul orbs (future hyperlink here) through a shop interface. The map includes four lanes, colored yellow, orange, blue, and magenta (or pink), as well as a jungle (hyperlink) in the center. Each lane contains 4 objectives: Guardians and Walkers, who protect the Patron (hyperlink).
+The jungle is home to many of the game's objectives, including monsters that grant buffs to a team when defeated. (Explain monsters here.) Additionally, there is a secret shop located around the jungle where players can buy items.
-The jungle is where many of the games objectives are located, including monsters who provide buffs to a team when killed. (Explain monsters here.) There are also a secret shop surrounding the jungle where players can purchase items.