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{{Quotation|'''A FATE'S TALE'''|

Born to criminal royalty, Kaori and her brother Yamato always knew they were destined to run The 7th Moon after their fathers passing. For years they ran the organization as equals; leading to profit, success, and plans for expansion to the United States.

~~Born into a family of crime bosses,~~ Kaori and ~~her brother~~ Yamato ~~always knew they were destined~~ to ~~take over control~~ of ~~the Seventh Moon after~~ their ~~father's death. Together they ran~~ the ~~organization for years, bringing it profit and success, and even planning an expansion into America~~.

The idea was simple. Kaori would stay in Japan and maintain things at home, while Yamato would travel to America to set up an international presence. Unfortunately for the siblings; this plan didn't sit well with some of their more insecure underlings, who bristled at the idea of being led by Kaori in Japan.

The ~~plan~~ was ~~simple:~~ Kaori ~~would remain~~ in ~~Japan to control the country, while Yamato would travel to America to establish an international base. Unfortunately for the siblings, some~~ of ~~their subordinates~~ were ~~not happy about Kaori's plan~~ to ~~take command in~~ Japan.

The coup was swift and violent. Yamato gave his life protecting Kaori, but in doing so ensured that she and a handful of loyalists were able to escape Japan for America.

~~The rebellion was swift and violent. Yamato sacrificed his life to protect Kaori, and Kaori was saved by a handful of loyal members.~~

When she arrived stateside, the contact her brother was supposed to meet greeted her and her retinue. Unfamiliar with the gender of Japanese names, the man addressed her as Yamato. She thought to correct him, but decided that the best way to keep her brother's memory alive was to take his name and live out his dream.

~~Together with her subordinates~~, ~~she managed to escape from Japan to~~ the ~~United States. When Kaori and~~ her ~~group arrived in the United States, they were greeted by a man who~~ was supposed to ~~greet Yamato~~. ~~He was not familiar~~ with Japanese names ~~and did not know Kaori.~~

"Yamato.~~" Kaori~~ thought ~~about correcting his mistake~~, but~~...~~

~~She~~ decided that the best way to ~~remember~~ her brother was to take ~~on the Yamato~~ name and ~~make~~ his dream ~~come true~~.

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 {{Quotation|'''A FATE'S TALE'''|
+Born to criminal royalty, Kaori and her brother Yamato always knew they were destined to run The 7th Moon after their fathers passing.  For years they ran the organization as equals; leading to profit, success, and plans for expansion to the United States.
-Born into a family of crime bosses, Kaori and her brother Yamato always knew they were destined to take over control of the Seventh Moon after their father's death. Together they ran the organization for years, bringing it profit and success, and even planning an expansion into America.
+The idea was simple.  Kaori would stay in Japan and maintain things at home, while Yamato would travel to America to set up an international presence.  Unfortunately for the siblings; this plan didn't sit well with some of their more insecure underlings, who bristled at the idea of being led by Kaori in Japan.
-The plan was simple: Kaori would remain in Japan to control the country, while Yamato would travel to America to establish an international base. Unfortunately for the siblings, some of their subordinates were not happy about Kaori's plan to take command in Japan.
+The coup was swift and violent.  Yamato gave his life protecting Kaori, but in doing so ensured that she and a handful of loyalists were able to escape Japan for America.
-The rebellion was swift and violent. Yamato sacrificed his life to protect Kaori, and Kaori was saved by a handful of loyal members.
+When she arrived stateside, the contact her brother was supposed to meet greeted her and her retinue.  Unfamiliar with the gender of Japanese names, the man addressed her as Yamato.  She thought to correct him, but decided that the best way to keep her brother's memory alive was to take his name and live out his dream.
-Together with her subordinates, she managed to escape from Japan to the United States. When Kaori and her group arrived in the United States, they were greeted by a man who was supposed to greet Yamato. He was not familiar with Japanese names and did not know Kaori.
-"Yamato." Kaori thought about correcting his mistake, but...
-She decided that the best way to remember her brother was to take on the Yamato name and make his dream come true.
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