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== Chapter 1: Welcome To New York == | == Chapter 1: Welcome To New York == | ||
Holliday: I hate New York. | Holliday: I hate New York. Hey *Huff*, I just wanted to call let you know I got in safe. | ||
Larry: It would have been a lot faster if you just took an airship. | Larry: It would have been a lot faster if you just took an airship. | ||
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Holliday: Yeah, but that would have meant getting on an airship. | Holliday: Yeah, but that would have meant getting on an airship. | ||
Larry: So what's your plan? | Larry: So, what's your plan? | ||
Holliday: I put a bullet in that son of a bitch. | Holliday: I put a bullet in that son of a bitch. | ||
Larry: That's the | Larry: That's the goal. What's your plan? | ||
Holliday: I'm meeting a friend tomorrow. Said they had some leads. I'll know more then. | Holliday: I'm meeting a friend tomorrow. Said they had some leads. I'll know more then. | ||
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Larry: Don't die. | Larry: Don't die. | ||
Holliday: Bye. | Holliday: Bye. Ari’s right. I need to rest. Maybe, if I'm lucky, I won't dream. | ||
Holliday: What did you do to them? | Holliday: What did you do to them? | ||
Holliday: Nooo- *Huff Puff* I can't waste any more time. It's time to get to work. | |||
''Followed by [[Holliday's visual novel/Transcription#Chapter 2a|Chapter 2a]] (Connect With Your Cop Friend) or Chapter 2b (Connect With Your Reporter Friend)'' | |||
''Followed by [[Holliday's visual novel/Transcription#Chapter 2a | |||
== Chapter 2a - Jurisdiction == | == Chapter 2a - Jurisdiction == | ||
''Follows from | ''Follows from Chapter 1'' | ||
Holliday: Hey, I'm here to speak with Captain Murphy. | Holliday: Hey, I'm here to speak with Captain Murphy. | ||
Front Desk Woman: At three in the morning? | |||
Holliday: Yeah, it's only | Holliday: Yeah, it's only one my time. Look, just call him and tell him holiday's here. | ||
Front Desk Woman: He's married. | |||
Holliday: It's work. | Holliday: It's work. | ||
Front Desk Woman: Mm hmm. | |||
Holliday: Oh my god, lady, can you just call him? | Holliday: Oh my god, lady, can you just call him? | ||
Front Desk Woman: Hey, Murphy, you got a visitor. She says her name's "Christmas". | |||
Holliday: "Holliday"! | Holliday: "Holliday"! | ||
Front Desk Woman: Close enough. He's waiting for you in the back. | |||
Holliday: Been driving all night. Just got here. | |||
Captain Murphy: (...) | Captain Murphy: (...) | ||
Holliday: | Holliday: Larry said the same thing. | ||
Captain Murphy: (...) | Captain Murphy: (...) | ||
Holliday: | Holliday: Maybe people should stop giving unsolicited advice. | ||
Captain Murphy: (...) | Captain Murphy: (...) | ||
Holliday: | Holliday: Yeah, you're not. | ||
Captain Murphy: (...) | Captain Murphy: (...) | ||
Holliday: | Holliday: No, it's him. | ||
Agent Marlow: Indeed, it is sheriff. That's why we're here. | |||
Captain Murphy: (...) | Captain Murphy: (...) | ||
Angent Marlow: Agent Marlow OSIC. | |||
Captain Murphy: (...) | Captain Murphy: (...) | ||
Angent Marlow: What match? | |||
Captain Murphy: (...) | Captain Murphy: (...) | ||
Agent | Agent Marlow: It's already over. | ||
Captain Murphy: (...) | |||
Captain | Agent Marlow: You've done fine work, Captain, but I think your friend from Macomb would agree that you're out of your element. Now I'm going to get a coffee, and when I come back, I need to know if you're going to help me or if you're going to get out of my way. | ||
Holliday: How did he know I was from Macomb? | Holliday: You know him. How did he know I was from Macomb? | ||
Captain Murphy: (...) | Captain Murphy: (...) | ||
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Holliday: Fair. You trust him? | Holliday: Fair. You trust him? | ||
Holliday: Good thing. I got a winning personality. | |||
Holliday: Good thing I got a winning personality. | |||
''To be continued...'' | ''To be continued...'' | ||
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Holliday: If that thing's dead and I'm alive, you can have all the time you want. | Holliday: If that thing's dead and I'm alive, you can have all the time you want. | ||
Allie: I was talking to someone who thinks he knows where the | Allie: I was talking to someone who thinks he knows where the troubadour will strike next. | ||
Holliday: How? | Holliday: How? | ||
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Allie: He's someone with a... unique insight. | Allie: He's someone with a... unique insight. | ||
Holliday: | Holliday: Ally, don't tell me you've been taken in by a Dime Store Scryer. | ||
Allie: I'm not. | Allie: I'm not. | ||
Holliday: If divinations | Holliday: If divinations work, then the OSIC would already have him. | ||
Allie: This is different. | Allie: This is different. | ||
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Holliday: Then why isn't he telling the cops? | Holliday: Then why isn't he telling the cops? | ||
Allie: He doesn't | Allie: He doesn't want to help the cops. He wants to help you. | ||
Holliday: Who have you been talking to? | Holliday: Who have you been talking to? | ||
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Allie: I can't tell you. | Allie: I can't tell you. | ||
Holliday: | Holliday: God damn it. Ally, this is not the time for journalistic integrity. | ||
Allie: We don't get to pick and choose when to follow the rules. | Allie: We don't get to pick and choose when to follow the rules. | ||
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Holliday: Look at me and tell me how much I care about the rules right now. | Holliday: Look at me and tell me how much I care about the rules right now. | ||
Allie: If you really wanna meet my source | Allie: If you really wanna meet my source. I can talk to him, but you came here to stop the Troubadour before he kills again. So maybe you should just take the tip. | ||
''To be continued...'' | ''To be continued...'' | ||
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